Re:Musings of a desperate man
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TOPIC: Re:Musings of a desperate man
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Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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The high squeak of brakes,
Dogs barking in the distance,
Brown van, gold letters.
Heart pounding, breathing deeply
I run to the door,
Fling it open, step out side.
Man in uniform
Crosses the road, through the gate...
...of my neighbors yard...
Maybe tomorrow will bring,
Precious chrome to me.

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Last Edit: 2009/10/14 20:07 By SurveyWaters.
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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Think I'm gonna cry just at the thought of waiting another day.
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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SurveyWaters wrote:
The high squeak of brakes,
Dogs barking in the distance,
Brown van, gold letters.
Heart pounding, breathing deeply
I run to the door,
Throw it back, step out side.
Man in uniform
Crosses the road, through the gate...
...of my neighbors yard...
Maybe tomorrow will bring,
Precious chrome to me.
Step back in side,
Head hanging low,
A few drinks and fall to sleep,
Dreaming of that other precious metal, chrome...
Stumble from bed,
Out the door to work,
Another day to wait,
And...
Brown box on the step, quietly delivered,
Sat alone in the dark all night,
Relieved to be in a good neighborhood...
Weeeee.....
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Last Edit: 2009/10/14 19:06 By TampaSVT.
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2008 Road Star
Tricky Air Ride(remote controlled)
6-degree Raked Front-end
Ape Hangers w/Internal Throttle & Wiring
RoadHouse Dooleys
Bunch of chrome
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http://www.TampaSVT.com
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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Jon D (User)
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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that's my job..... just I drive the bigger version with the two trailers behind it
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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SurveyWaters wrote:
The high squeak of brakes,
Dogs barking in the distance,
Brown van, gold letters.
Heart pounding, breathing deeply
I run to the door,
Throw it back, step out side.
Man in uniform
Crosses the road, through the gate...
...of my neighbors yard...
Maybe tomorrow will bring,
Precious chrome to me.
Dude....you had a Super Haiku going until line six, which had six syllables. So close......
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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The haiku style exagerated was my intent, I did some last minute editing and screwed it up, thanks for pointing out my folly.  I have returned the line to it's original.
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Last Edit: 2009/10/14 20:08 By SurveyWaters.
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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Last Edit: 2009/10/14 20:40 By Kai_Sayson.
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Re:Musings of a desperate man 2 Years, 7 Months ago
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SurveyWaters wrote:
The haiku style exagerated was my intent, I did some last minute editing and screwed it up, thanks for pointing out my folly. I have returned the line to it's original.
Dude....I love it!
Only trying to help 
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